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Hey, don't say you failed! You didn't! It looks great, honestly. I love how you animated the eyes and the background, how you shaded, a...

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Never Listen To A Raven
We've all heard those stories of ghosts, demons, things that go bump in the night. Those stories, they are all fake. But this one... this one is real. I witnessed it with my own eyes. I shared it. They did not believe me. Perhaps you will...
The sky was dark with thick storm clouds. School had just gotten out. Justin, a high school sophmore, climbed into his car to drive home. As he closed the door, it started to rain. A slight drizzle at first, but it soon turned into a downpour. He turned on his high beams and drove slowly back to his house. A flash of lightning and then a loud CRACK sounded. Something black and hunched over moved out of the corner of his eye, and he glanced over. Nothing. He shivered. Justin had always been obsessed with the paranormal. Ouija Boards, seances, all of that. Now he was just freaking himself out. He told himself to snap out of it as he turned into his driveway. He glanced over at the farm in the distance, and a prickle ran up his spine. He whipped aroun
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FNaF: Night 1: Marcus: 'All the rumors...'
Tick, tock, tick, tock...
Marcus glanced at the clock. 12AM, his first night on the job. He'd heard rumors about Fazbear's Pizza. They all seemed stupid, like scary stories people tell to scare little kids. 
The 19-year-old sighed. He would never admit it to anyone... but the pizzeria kind of creeped him out. "Why do they even need a night guard anyway?" he wondered. "It's not like someone's gonna come in here and-" 
ringring, ringring
Marcus jumped at the sudden noise. He stared at the phone. "Someone ordering a late night pizza?" He chuckled.
"Hello, hello?" He was about to answer when the voice continued. "Uh, I wanted to record a message for you to help you get settled in on your first night. Uh, I actually worked in the office before you. I'm finishing up my last week now, as a matter of fact. So, I know it can be a bit overwhelming, but I'm her to tell you there's nothing to worry about. Uh, you'll do fine. So, let's just focus on getting you through your first week. Ok
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Page 120
Turn to page 120.
It's written in the margins of every volume, in the blank pages at the front and back, over and over again, in shiny brown ink. Turn to page 120.
Childish scribbles in a set of ruined books, I knew, the reason this encyclopedia was dirt-cheap at a yard sale. I didn't care: who needs a paper encyclopedia these days? I bought it because it was too good a deal to pass up, because I thought it'd make me look learned, academic. The encyclopedia aesthetic. And I did find it amusing to poke around in, scribbles aside: outdated information preserved in ink and paper, brief summaries of complex concepts, the occasional racist aside. An old encyclopedia is a world unto itself. And wherever there was once a white space the same message: turn to page 120.
Who wouldn't be curious? It takes minimal effort to find a certain page: you don't have to expect much of a payoff for that to be worth it. Of course I turned to page 120.
Every volume I checked, it was the
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Made with DeviantArt muro here's a drawing of Turtle from Wings of Fire, the second arc! All rights of Wings of Fire go to Tui T. Sutherland!
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Made with DeviantArt muro I was bored so this was just something I came up with. I guess it's me if I was a killer? I don't know XD I was really just experimenting 


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Hey, don't say you failed! You didn't! It looks great, honestly. I love how you animated the eyes and the background, how you shaded, and your style! Very good! The lines could have been a bit smoother, though, I did realize they were a bit shaky. Other than that, great! You did better than I could have done! I'm guessing you've been drawing for a long time, yeah? Anyhow, you could have gone over the outlines to check and see if they were shaky or smooth. The coloration looks good though. The ears and the eyes definitely look like they have depth. Not even joking. Kinda looks like I could reach out and touch it... But, heh, I'm going on a tangent here. Another tip, don't say you failed at anything! I know I've done, so has everyone else. But don't think that about your art. I'd love some tips from you, if you don't mind. But just keep on drawing! You did great!
Tick, tock, tick, tock...

Marcus glanced at the clock. 12AM, his first night on the job. He'd heard rumors about Fazbear's Pizza. They all seemed stupid, like scary stories people tell to scare little kids. 

The 19-year-old sighed. He would never admit it to anyone... but the pizzeria kind of creeped him out. Why do they even need a night guard anyway? he wondered. It's not like someone's gonna come in here and- 

ringring, ringring

Marcus jumped at the sudden noise. He stared at the phone. Someone ordering a late night pizza? He chuckled.

Hello, hello?"
He was about to answer when the voice continued. "Uh, I wanted to record a message for you to help you get settled in on your first night. Uh, I actually worked in the office before you. I'm finishing up my last week now, as a matter of fact. So, I know it can be a bit overwhelming, but I'm her to tell you there's nothing to worry about. Uh, you'll do fine. So, let's just focus on getting you through your first week. Okay?

Uh, let's see, first there's an introductory greeting from the company that I'm supposed to read. Uh, it's kind of a legal thing, you know. Um, "Welcome to Freddy Fazbear's Pizza. A magical place for kids and grown-ups alike, where fantasy and fun come to life. Fazbear Entertainment is not responsible for damage to property or person. Upon discovering that damage or death has occurred, a missing person report will be filed within 90 days, or as soon property and premises have been thoroughly cleaned and bleached, and the carpets have been replaced."

Blah blah blah, now that might sound bad, I know, but there's really nothing to worry about. Uh, the animatronic characters here do get a bit quirky at night, but do I blame them? No. If I were forced to sing those same stupid songs for twenty years and I never got a bath? I'd probably be a bit irritable at night too. So, remember, these characters hold a special place in the hearts of children and we need to show them a little respect, right? Okay.

So, just be aware, the characters do tend to wander a bit. Uh, they're left in some kind of free roaming mode at night. Uh...Something about their servos locking up if they get turned off for too long. Uh, they used to be allowed to walk around during the day too. But then there was The Bite of '87. Yeah. I-It's amazing that the human body can live without the frontal lobe, you know?

Uh, now concerning your safety, the only real risk to you as a night watchman here, if any, is the fact that these characters, uh, if they happen to see you after hours probably won't recognize you as a person. They'll p-most likely see you as a metal endoskeleton without its costume on. Now since that's against the rules here at Freddy Fazbear's Pizza, they'll probably try to...forcefully stuff you inside a Freddy Fazbear suit. Um, now, that wouldn't be so bad if the suits themselves weren't filled with crossbeams, wires, and animatronic devices, especially around the facial area. So, you could imagine how having your head forcefully pressed inside one of those could cause a bit of discomfort...and death. Uh, the only parts of you that would likely see the light of day again would be your eyeballs and teeth when they pop out the front of the mask, heh.

Y-Yeah, they don't tell you these things when you sign up. But hey, first day should be a breeze. I'll chat with you tomorrow. Uh, check those cameras, and remember to close the doors only if absolutely necessary. Gotta conserve power. Alright, good night.

Marcus stared at the phone, shocked. Good night? After that? He fumbled around for the monitor and turned it on, clicking through the cameras frantically. He stopped on the main stage, checking that all of them were there.  Freddy, Chica... where's Bonnie?!

The purple rabbit was gone. All the rumors... they had actually been true? That wasn't possible! He started flicking through them again. There! Party Room A. He was just... standing there. Staring at the camera.

Ok, that's creepy, Marcus commented. Suddenly there was static. What the-  The camera went back to normal, but the animatronic wasn't in the party room. The night guard started flipping through the cameras again, terrified. Backstage. With his purple muzzle pressed up against the camera screen. Great, he's getting closer! Marcus groaned.

dong

The clock now read 1AM. Marcus slumped down in his seat and closed the monitor, breathing heavily. He left it closed for a long time, not moving. Finally, he stretched his arm out to check the hallway. He pressed the light and screamed. Bonnie was right there! He slammed a fist down on the red button. The door slammed down. 

With a sigh of releif, he turned to check the other hallway. He turned on the light and immediately slammed the door shut. Great, I've got Bonnie and Chica on both sides of me! Marcus groaned. He watched the power go down slowly.

30%... 29%... 28%... 27%... 26%...

dong, dong, dong, dong, dong

5AM. He hadn't realized how much time had passed.

10%... 9%... 8%...

Both doors were still closed. He grimaced as it got closer and closer to 0%. 6AM, 6AM, please come! he begged

4%... 3%... 2%... 1%... 0%...

The lights went out. The doors opened on both sides. All Marcus could hear was his own breathing. Then...

step... step... step... step...

A face appeared in the left doorway and he yelped. Music started playing, the face started flickering. Oh no, oh no, oh no. Freddy was here. His power was gone. His heart was pounding. And then...

ding, ding, dong, dongggg... dong, dong, ding, dinggg

Yeeeesssss! he cheered. His shift was over. Grabbing his bag, he ran out of the office. None of the animatronics were moving. Which was good, in his opinion. Fishing his keys out of his pocket, he unlocked the door, stepped outside, and locked it again. He jumped in his car and sped away, far away from that place as possible, to his own house and his own bed. He wasn't planning on coming back anytime soon. Little did he know that he had to.

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Recently, I switched to doing traditional pen-and-paper art. I will still do digital art, but will be mostly submitting traditional. I just got into FNaF, so the first traditional peices you will see are going to be my FNaF OCs. As always, have a great day!
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JulijanaM Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much for the watch! :) I appreciate a lot your support and hope you enjoy my future works as well! :happybounce:

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Turtle-Strike Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, no problem! I love your art!
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LysitheaWO Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello,
I'm sorry to bother you but I'd like to know do you take requests ?
Thanks x3
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